writing exercise

(question)
Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number
of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community,
or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in
search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to supportyour opinion.

(answer)
Some say that they prefer to live in one place because they like to keep being on close terms with their friends who live in the same area, others insist that they like to move many times because it has more benefits. In my opinion, the latter one is true for the following reasons. Firstly, I can truly enjoy what I like in the most appropriate area. Secondly, I can get a better job which gives me a higher salary. This essay will discuss these reasons in further detail.

One of the most useful aspects of keep changing the place is that it enables me to look for the place where I can enjoy what I like. People who like marine sports can move to live near the ocean, and people who like to go to the theater can change the place to live where the show business flourishes. In my case, my favorite hobby is listening to the music played by the professional musicians. These lives are held often in the city. However, I lived in the rural area when I was a child, so I could not go often to listen to the music lives. Now, I have moved to the city where I can enjoy the mucical lives, so I go to the concerts, lives, and so on almost every day. I feel very happy with it.

Another important advantage of moving the place is that I can get a better job which gives me a higher salary. It often happens that I have to move in order to get a better job. For example, where I was born and grown up until I entered the university, I could hardly find the good job because in the rural area such jobs were not offered. At present, I live in the one of the biggest city in the world, so I can easily find the job which gives me a higher salary. I find it exciting to get a good job and it is important for me because I spend much time on working, so I would like to choose the job I feel very exciting.

In conclusion, I prefer to move the place which I live in if I find it easy and effective to enjoy what I like most in that area. Furthermore, I do not mind changing the place because it help me to look for the better job by which I can enjoy my life. Now I give priority to getting the good job, so I live in the huge city. However, when I retired, I plan to live in Europe because I can enjoy the music better in Europe than where I live now. In this way, changing the place when I want to do is also a beneficial aspect. I think I will move the place when I want to do.